Honest Opinions + Ideas On Continuing

Ella: If you had a chance to make things better, and tell my sister how much you love her…
Ella: Would you.
Eli: Of course I would! I hate seeing her hurt…
Eli: I just want to hold her and tell her how much she means to me.
Ella: Then do it.
Ella points over to Anna who’s sitting on a bench alone crying into her hands

(Eli and Anna are girlfriends (in a relationship) on a break because Eli misinterpreted a situation where she thought Anna cheated when Anna is actually completely innocent, and Eli has been ignoring Anna which broke her heart more)

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Huh?

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Eli thinks Anna cheated. Anna is in fact loyal an always ways. Eli has been ignoring Anna for about 3 weeks. And Anna is completely heartbroken.

@CerealKiller

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Maybe have Eli help Anna. I am not 100% sure.

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Moved to writing feedback :eyes: