I need some help

Anyone know of any good motivations to help me finish writing my next chapter. I’m stuck on a few scenes and each time I go back to them I lose interest. I want to finish this chapter so I can publish it. It’s 5 months late to be honest. It’s not really writers block but I’m just struggling with this right now.

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The satisfaction of finishing a chapter is usually good enough motivation for me but if you need help with a few scenes then maybe I can help you.

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Usually that is good for me too but I think it’s the certain scenes that are the main problem. If you could help that would be great!

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I’ll try my best to help! What are the scenes? And are they on episode cause I’m bad with coding, but if it’s actual writing them I can help!

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They are on episode. it’s mainly the dialogue that I need help with. I can do the coding part on my own. So the first scene I’m having problems with is a scene where two characters meet up with another pair of characters. They are in the Yakuza so this meeting is about gang work.

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Oh interesting, so are you having trouble with how they are gonna meet?

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I already have the meeting spot setup. They are in the V.I.P. room of the club in the story. They are to go over news that has recently come up in the story. The news is that one of their members is dead and another was taken the police station. Also they have to play nice with another Yakuza gang that hates them basically.

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Oohh okay so are you having trouble with how what there gonna say to each other?

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Yes, I get to that part and I just go blank. This part of the story is based in Philadelphia. If you want we can go to pm to talk more about this? Or we can stay on this thread.

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We can pm!

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Okay cool!

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Talk through the scene with someone who isn’t reading it helps me sometimes.

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Yeah, that’s a good idea! Thank you!

I need help from someone who can write drama romance. I have gone over this scene too many times and it still comes out corny.

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Someone brings shot’s to two characters who take them and the night is a blur from that moment on and before they know one is in bed with the best-friends brother and the other ended up in bed with CharacterA, I’m trying to write the first pair’s scene and I need it to be dramatic because one has feelings for the other but other character doesn’t know how she feels about the brother. She’s still on the fence at this point.

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