So, in the fourth chapter of my story, there’s a scene where the MC asks her students to introduce themselves and share something interesting about themselves with the class.
After each kid does this, the reader gets to see the MC’s reaction to this. However, I’m debating on whether or not I should cut to the MC and show her thoughts in a speech bubble, or… just display the MC’s thoughts in a narration box.
The second option would be to show the MC’s thoughts like this:
- Show MC’s thoughts with a narration box
- Switch back and forth between the kids and MC to show her thoughts in a though bubble